When You Reach Me is a book about a girl named Miranda who breaks up with her old friend named Sal. Miranda meets a store owner named Jimmy who has a stash of two dollar bills. Miranda finds a man who kicks his foot out on the street and sleeps under a mailbox and says a chant that says “book, bag, pocket, shoe” over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over v and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and many more times again. Miranda also meets the kid who punched her old friend Sal, and thinks time travel is possible. I rate this book 5 stars. I think this book is good for ages 8-14. If you have read the book A Wrinkle In Time, you will like this book.
hi polly please look at the spaces between words because for your first sentence you wrote WhenYou instead of writing When You and also you wrote herold instead of her old so please fix it because some people who read this it wont make sence
Good advice Olivia P, check over your work for space issues. This sounds like a great book if you like to read about fantastical events that happen in realistic settings. The chanting man sounds like an especially interesting character.
Hi Polly. You did a great job on the review. But like Olivia P. said, look at the spaces.
It’s really cool that she thinks time travel is possible! I wish it actually was!
When you wrote over and over a lot, there is a “v” in the middle. But great job otherwise!
I think you should shorten the over and overs.