Remarkable by Lizzie K. Foley
REMARKABLE- It’s a wonderful town. Until today, the Gifted school turned BLUE!!!!! By the Grimlet Twins. All of a sudden everyone heard a big BOOM!!! It was coming from the direction of the Gifted School.
Jane, the only girl at the Public School, had seen the Grimlet Twins before buying about forty bottle of bluing rinse, ten boxes of gum balls, and a few mouse traps. Jane was suspicious, but the Grimlet Twins wouldn’t tell her why they bought everything. They said she would figure out soon enough and she did. The very next day at school the Grimlet Twins had put their plan into action. They turned the Gifted School blue. It was a big surprise for everyone in the Gifted School and out. The explosion made a big boom. Literally everything around it turned blue, even the students and teachers turned BLUE!!! The school Playground and Bus. Everything! The Public School watched as everyone in the Gifted School looked out the window confused for the moment. Everyone looked at each other and looked out. People stopped and stared. They all thought on what had happened.
The principle of the school called a meeting late at night at the gifted school. All the teachers and parents of gifted students had to attend.
The Grimlet Twins were expelled and were happy about it. Almost like they were planning it. Which most think they were. Especially their principal the esteemed Doctor Presnalda. The Grimlet Twins wanted to be in trouble and they knew they would in the public school only Jane go’s to. So the very next day the Grimlet Twins got in trouble they did all sorts of stuff, like Chew Gum, have a spitball fight, run with scissors, and eat paper.
The esteemed Doctor Presnaldas sister thought that Doctor Presnalda was punishing her for not coming to the meeting by giving her the Grimlet Twins. Her sister worked at the public school and sent the Grimlet Twins to the public school. The day the gifted school turned Blue. A tiring day for everybody. The Blue as sky school…
Dear, Jade
I love how much action you put into these books it makes me want to read them. Where did you get them? – Suko
Dear Jade
Blue School alert.
I love how you put so much detail in your description of the second paragraph. I thought you put a lot of detail in that because when Jane saw the boys with all the equipment they told her she would see what there going to do with the forty bottle of bluing rinse, ten boxes of gum balls, and a few mouse traps, and when they made the explosion it was really funny when you described a lot of things that turned blue. Like (of course the building), the buses, and Evan the humans! ~Beckett