It’s about a kid named Moon Blake, he lives in the forest with his father. Then one day a guy buys part of the land that they’re living in. So the father gets stressed out, then the father gets a piece of wood stuck in his leg, After time he dies. He tells moon to try to get to Alaska, with his last breath. So Moon backs his stuff in the wheelbarrow and sets for Alaska. He finds out which way Alaska is and he walks that way. Then a police man finds him walking. They have a little fight with one another, after a while the police man puts him in the car and puts him in jail. He stays there for a while and then goes to a boys home. He meets his friend who has a breathing problem and another buff one. Moon has plans to get out of the mini hell, will he with his friends or will he be stuck in there for ever? Find out if you read the book, I give this book a five star rating. It was a great book, it makes me cry every time I read it.
I like how you talked about the peoples emotions.
I will defiantly read the book from this review. Also I like the ‘mini hell.’
Thanks guys it’s really sad, but you should read it.
Do you know how old Moon Blake is?
I agree with Emma. Do you know how old is Moon Blake is?
I think when I read this I might cry because of everything you described.
This book sounds really good! How sad is it?
Julien,
Excellent summary! And I agree with what everyone wrote. Very vivid writing. I need a tissue!
Two suggestions though —
1. Break your writing into paragraphs to make it easier to read.
2. I’d like a little more of your thoughts about why you liked it or didn’t like it.
Do you think that I might like this?