I went to sleep away camp for 7 weeks. I was surprised that one of the main things that I was interested in was Archery. I had never really liked archery before.
I am really glad that I tried archery. All of my archery was done at Camp Cedar, it is in Casco, ME
This is me doing archery on 10 yards, I shot a 136 with 15 arrows.
This is me doing archery on 15 yards, I shot 122 with 15 arrows
When I shot a 136 I had all of my shots in the yellow area. It’s really hard to do that. My average shot was 9.067.
I think that you should say why you’re glad that you tried archery. I do archery too, and it’s really fun. My record is three hundred seventy-seven on fifty arrows.
That’s pretty good. My record is 136 on 15 arrows.
I’m glad you shared this story with me because now I feel like I should play soccer. I could just image you blocking people’s shots. As I said in my last comment I think you could add a story of how you saved the game or a moment you were great. 10 out of 10 would read it again.
I like how you put captions on your pictures. I think that you could written a little more about what you did.
I really like how you posted about a new experience that you had this summer. I think that you picked a really great thing to post about. I also really like how you added in some facts about soccer. One suggestion is that maybe you could have made your post a little bit longer and talked more about where you played soccer.
Thanks for the suggestions.
Sorry, this was for a different post.