Hi guys. I would like to share about my summer. I went to sleep away camp for 7 weeks and then when I got home I had nothing really to do! But I figured it out. I was swimming in the pool and having barbecues. I had a great summer. Then I was so happy to start school. The first day of school was so much fun. Right? I am having a great year so far. How about you. I am showing you a picture of my camp’s lake. I spent a lot of time there.
walt whitman
my lake
Hi Emma,
Thanks for sharing! A few quick notes:
-Mind your capitals (there are a few “i”s that sound be “I”s.)
-“I was swimming and the pool” I think you mean “in the pool”
-“I am showing you a picture of my camps lake”– camps should be “camp’s” since it’s their lake
Make these few small changes and update your post and you’ll be all set!
-Clair