I am proud of my creative writing piece. I thought that it was an example of my best work. I worked very hard on it. I found it to be difficult to find out what you wanted to happen next because it might not make sense. I learned to write a story with more action. So it wasn’t just like a regular persons life or someone’s life who is not regular but there is no action. I think to stay at this level of work I should spend a lot of time and make sure it is  4 worthy. I found describing all the action was difficult because there was a lot going on. I learned that if you add a little bit of action. And I think I can improve on being more descriptive in my action and working on my editing skills.