I went to Hawaii!
In Hawaii I learned how to surf, play the ukulele and snorkel. We stayed in 
a little house right out side the beach where we could go surfing and swimming every day. Our house was right next to puff the magic dragon I went on a six mile hike to a beach and then to a freezing cold water fall where we swam. I went to Lumahi beach and jumped faff a eight foot cliff into the worm ocean. I didn’t want to go to Hawaii but know i can see why we went. I would be happy to go there again.
Seems fun! You did a really good job but maybe you can expand a little bit.
That’s sounds so cool! What is puff the magic dragon? Was the six mile hike hard? One quick thing, did you mean warm ocean? It says worm ocean.