This is a picture of all of my cousins and I chilling in the Bahamas.
This is a picture of my cousin, Jordan and I jumping into a pool in the Bahamas.
This is a picture of my cousin, Jordan and I with a statue after dinner in the Bahamas.
This is a picture of my cousin, Jordan and I making a heart with our hands in front of the ocean in the Bahamas.
I recently went to the Bahamas with my whole family. All three of my cousins came. There names are Eva, Christopher and Jordan. Both of my Aunts came. There names are Erin, and Cindy. Both of my Uncles came. There names are Chris, and Adam. My Grandpa came. His name is Richard. Last, but not least my Mom came. Her name is Kim.
My mom and I go to the Bahamas a lot because my mom used to go there when she was little so now it is kind of a tradition for us. We always go to a resort called Atlantis. At Atlantis there are eight different water slides. The scariest one is called The Leap of Faith. It goes pretty much straight down. Then it goes through a shark tank (in a tube of course.) My favorite slide is called the Abyss. It is pretty much the same as the Leap of Faith but it is in the dark and you don’t go through a shark tank.
I really like the way the people sing happy birthday at Atlantis so every single dinner Uncle Adam and Aunt Erin would tell the people who work at the restaurant that it is my mom’s birthday even though it wasn’t. It was really funny because my mom didn’t know it was coming. Then at the end of the trip we all compared all the different birthday songs. My favorite was a the song from the Chinese restaurant called Chopstix (with a x).
I had a really fun time and i hope i can spend time with my whole family again soon.
This post was very detailed and I really like it
I thought it was funny that you wrote about how you said it was your mom’s birthday everyday, so everyone would sing happy birthday. I also really like how you named all of your relatives who came on the trip. I find it nice how you really made spending time with your relatives the center of your post. I think it’s really great that you took a trip with your whole family.
That sounds really fun! I’ve never been to the Bahamas. Did you go on the leap of faith? That sounds really scary. I really do not like sharks.
This sounds like a fun vacation! I like how you described what the picture was about. I think when you described how your whole family came you said, my aunt came. Her name is… Maybe you could say my aunts Erin and Cindy came so as my uncles Chris and Adam. Instead of saying my aunts came. Their names are Erin and Cindy. And also for the other family members.