Nice humor. And even though this might be a little to “advanced” for kids our age I still think this is a way to simplify the problem and not make a big deal about it.
I think that this is realistic how the friends would want to help. I think think this is really good and it’s true that in real life friends want to help each other
How realation ships can get out off hand but it cna get better. Also you should never cheat. Also how friends ask eachother to help eachother.
I liked how each person had a saying in the conflict
I love your conflict and how they fix it and I love you beginning to it great job
Nice humor. And even though this might be a little to “advanced” for kids our age I still think this is a way to simplify the problem and not make a big deal about it.
I think that this is realistic how the friends would want to help. I think think this is really good and it’s true that in real life friends want to help each other
you might want to not say tell me as much
This help me learn about friends trying to help other friend with hard times.
This help me learn about friends trying to help other friend with hard times.
I like how you had the characters make a plan to fix the problem.
the conflicted is girlfriend and boyfriend relation ships and how friends can help.
This help me learn about friends trying to help other friend with hard times and that people are there for you.
The conflict was good but you should add emotion