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Im rich and better than you

 

 

My name is Auntie. I am a old, Bossy Aunt.  I am a very rich woman. For all woman who are struggling with money, I have some advice for you. Marry a rich man. What this will do is he will give you a lot of money, gifts, and a huge house. “uncle comes several times a year, bringing gifts, quilts, shawls, and brass pots.” I now live a very good life thanks to money. With being rich comes other things too. You get very bossy and greedy. 2 things I love to be. I get very bossy when it comes to everyone else because I am better than them, So I should get everything. However, with uncle gone I do tend to get lonely at times. I just feel like I am missing someone. I do love Uncle. I wish he was here now. One second I hear someone walking in. Wait! could that be. Its uncle!

Skeletal Blog post

 

 

Our system protects the body by using bones to shield organs. Our system also supports the body as well as helping it move by holding it up with bones. We have found out that the skeletal system is split in two parts, the axial and the appendicular. We have also found out that there are two different types of skeleton, the endoskeleton and the exoskeleton. We would like to further investigate what would happen to humans if we all had exoskeletons. We think that humans would become very small and vulnerable and eventually go extinct.

Spring break.

I went to Angualia for spring break. There I meant I guy named Rory. We instantly became “friends” in a way. He hated me. So what happened was I was playing football in the water, then he comes in. He grabs the football and throws it away. Then I take the football back and hit him in the head with it. My aim was on point that day. He then gets very mad at me and throws it back. Oh ya I forgot he is 46 years old. Later he leaves the pool and goes back to his room but that is just when we started the war. Every time I saw him passing I would yell at him. It was really funny. This went on for the entire trip. On the last day when he was at dinner I snuck up behind him and got a selfie. This is a highlight of my trip because it was really funny and a great memory to remember. I hope to see him soon.

Drawings post

This 2 are my 2 favorite drawings because I put in a lot of work on it.I also colored them to make them look nice. I tried to do a little shading but im not that good of an artist so its hard for me. However if I put in this much work on each of my pieces I could be okay.

Revising creative writing piece

My name is Jon Peppers.  I look so swag right now. I’m visiting america for the first time in four years and i’m having a great time. Four is my favorite number.  The only reason I was able to come was because my mom payed for me. I came because I have relatives in New York. I live in France and I work at starbucks. I hate france, I live there because it’s cheaper than new york. I live by myself and my dog named Bone. I miss New York.  I miss those days. Back home my apartment is very cramped like a subway car during rush hour. I’m only one person, but my house is not that big so it’s hard to move around in there. It’s hard to get anywhere from my house because it’s in the middle of NOWHERE. I hate it. If I want to go to the grocery store it will take me about forty five  minutes by car one way. But going to Starbucks is even worse it `will take me two hours on a good day to get there., and it’s not like I have any friends who live closer. My friend Joey who also works at starbucks with me. lives one hour from me the other direction. I want I would like to move back here when I get enough money. My last job I only made $ 7.25 an hour.   I worked at a shoe shining place in the Southern  France. (my face would always turn red when I got there because i hated it there.) When I was a young boy I wanted to be an astronaut. That dream crashed when I was seven. About when my dad died, but I don’t want to get into that now. I remember those days . The days when I didn’t have to go to work every day and not worry every day that I might not have enough money to last me the next week.

 

So enough about me. I’m in New York City, the city that never sleeps I should be telling you about what i’m doing. So right now I’m with my mom Isabella. She’s showing me around New York City and I’m having the best time. I’ve seen the statue of liberty and now we are at the  Empire state building.

“It’s so tall, nothing in Paris is as big as this.” I say

“ I know.” she says.

Then we have this moment we just look at each other and I say

“Can I stay with you mom.” I say

“ Yes, I already knew you were going to ask that.” She exclaims.

After the Empire State Building we go to her favorite restaurant in all of New York, Mcdonald’s.

“Mcdonald’s is amazing” I tell her

“I know right? I go here every Tuesday for lunch.” she replies

After Mcdonald’s we go back to my mom’s house and I see all the pictures of my dad. I start to tear up. My dad died when I was just seven in a shooting down in lower manhattan. They never found the person that killed him. Everytime my dad get brought up we start to get tears dripping down our faces. When my mom sees that i’m crying she comes over to me and gives me a hug. It made me feel happy inside. Later, we sit by her fireplace watching some TV just happy to see each other. Were watching Sportscenter (my favorite show, but of course I can’t afford cable so I can never watch it.) When I woke up the next morning she has a cup of coffee waiting to me, half milk half coffee just the way I like it. I put three packets of Sugar in the raw into cup of coffee.

 

The next day I go to the shop across the street. The guy working there says “Want a lottery ticket only $ 5.”

I say “sure.” (even though i’m going a little out of my limit for something I don’t need.)

He hands me the lotto ticket and I go to scratch it off. And just like that I couldn’t believe my eyes, I won. I won I won! I go yelling across the town screaming my head off. I knew this is going to change my life. My life got a whole lot better at a blink of an eye.   I won 10 million dollars.  The winning number was 4 my favorite number.I go and buy myself a lamborghini and a house in manhattan close by to my mom.  Todays my lucky day.

 

Revision is adding more detail to your piece for the better. For example my goal in revising this piece was in some parts  of my piece it’s dull so I want to make it flow nice and sound better. I feel like I added a lot more detail since I set myself out for this goal and my piece is a lot better.

Memoir

Happiness is the best feeling. When you’re happy it makes you feel so good. Happiness is all the best and most fun moments in your life. You know when you just did something you love or just make the game winning basket you feel happiness.

 

Happiness is the Jets. The Jets make me happy. They make me happy because They’re so appealing to watch. That’s why when they win it makes me feel so much happier.  The jets are not that good. I knew that when I choose to be a jets fan. My dad said “ The giants are better, but the Jets are exiting” so from that day on I’ve been a diehard Jets fan. Some days when the jets losing I can hear my T.V laughing at me for being a jets fan. But when they are winning I say this is why i’m a Jets fan.  

 

I have a dog. Her name is Moki. She is a German Shorthaired Pointer. She has brown fur and is sooooo cute. She so cute she makes me happy. Everything she does it makes me happy.  I love her so much. She is 6 now. Her normal day is sleep and eat. She loves to eat. She will eat anything. So one day a couple of weeks ago I was really sad and I was crying because the Jets lost. My mom said “I’ve never seen you cry this much.” That’s how much I was crying. So Moki ran up to me and lied down right on me. It made me feel happy again. And before that I never thought I was going to be happy again. It was the sweetest, cutest, and best thing ever. It made me feel so happy. I was so happy.

 

I  go to sleep away camp for seven weeks. It’s the best place on earth! Every second with my friends makes me so happy. Everything we do together we make it fun even if it is art with carlos.  One day last year at camp I was playing basketball with my friends Gavin, Reid, Drew, and Mason. 5 minutes after, a group leader for the H group (15) year olds came up to us and said  “Get the 5 best basketball players in your group and play against the 5 worst players in my group.” Around 4:00 somone said on the loudspeaker “if you’re playing in the basketball game please report to upper hoops.” The game started and in the first two minutes we were winning 13-0. Later in the game I got the ball. I drove down the court I pulled   up for 3, SWISH. We’re now winning 16-0. Reid got it and gave it me a behind the back pass and I made the layup. We were crushing them. At the end of the game we won 72 -12. It was so fun to play it made me so happy.

When you’re happy everyone around you is happy. Happiness is not just one feeling. It’s overjoyed, thrilled, upbeat, and so much more. When you feel happiness you’re in a great mood and that mood  cheerful. That’s why I love happiness.

I wonder if…

I wonder what would happen if all the humans disappear from earth. Well, I think that in the next 1 million years the earth would be like the moon.  I think that because all the animals would get no food and starve. Later, since that they will have no food they will be very hungry and try to either eat their own species or a different one. Also, humans have polluted the air. So in the long run the all the air will be polluted. That’s what I think would happen if all the humans disappeared from earth.

Street scene

Xander Street 1Xander Street Perspectve

The perspective drawing has been fun but really challenging. My favorite part so far was going outside and drawing the street scene. But the part that was challenging was making look like the buildings were further away from each other. I’m happy with my piece because I think even with the challenging parts I powered through and did a good job on it.