June 2016 archive

Summer Reading

Intro:

Before I start this blog post, I would like to make a little introduction. The first book I read this summer was Eleanor and park, and I found it on the middle school supplement list. I forgot we were not annotating all of the novels we read this summer, and so I did. When I finished the book, I decided I would record all of my annotations, and annotate all the books I read the summer. I often annotate books and I don’t really have a reason why I do, but it I think helps me understand the book. It also helps me think why the author did this or that. I am going to record my annotations and make a small review on the book from my annotations. Here is my summer assignment:

Eleanor and Park:

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Review

I recently completed the amazing novel that is Eleanor and Park. I have been meaning to read this book for a while, and when I saw it on the Middle School Supplement List, I knew immediately I had to read it. The book consists of Eleanor, a girl with an abusive step-dad (Richie), a fearful mother and many scared siblings. She has just returned to her family after Richie kicked her out for a year. Starting the school year, she arrives at the bus a few days after the first day of school scared and isolated from society. She then takes the empty seat next to Park, who is almost Eleanor’s polar opposite. His family is caring and he has many friends, which all happen to be the kids who bully Eleanor. The book follows Eleanor and Park navigating their high school year together. When I first started this book, my mind was focused on how isolated the characters were from each other. Looking more deeply, you can find isolation as a common or maybe even the most prominent theme in the book. I loved this book, and recommend it to everyone. Below are my annotations:

Annotations:

I think a theme in this book is isolation. Page 15

Eleanor is isolated from her siblings. Page 16

The book starts with Eleanor and park being so isolated from each other they don’t speak. Page 24

Eleanor is also isolated from her family. Page 26

This is the start of Eleanor and park not being isolated. Page 39

Eleanor is isolated from her family from her mom because of her step dad. But, Park will be her friend. Right now she is isolated from society. Page 53

Eleanor and park are having their first conversation to avoid isolation. Page 59

Isolation fading from Eleanor and park. Page 64

Park referring to Eleanor as a friend meaning isolation faded. Page 70

Mental isolation faded and now that Eleanor and park held hands physical isolation fades. Page 71

All isolation of Eleanor and park is gone. Page 90

Richie (her step-dad) kicking her out for a year is isolation from her entire family. Page 153

When Eleanor says that parks Dad looks more like park now, she’s saying she thinking of him like she thinks of park. Isolation fading between them. Parks family will be like the family she doesn’t have. Page 200

Eleanor tells park everything now, isolation gone. Page 287

When Eleanor runs away, she is now 100% isolated from her family. Page 292

When Eleanor ignores park, she quickly makes a new wall of isolation from him. Page 323

Fangirl

fangirl

Review

I read this book over the course of three days and am having a very difficult time having an opinion about it. I can’t call this book bad and say I did not lie, but saying this book was good is a lie too. The plot is simple, a girl named Cath and her twin sister are going to college. Both are obsessive when it comes to a book series called Simon Snow. Cath writes fan fiction. Her mother ran away when she was young, and her dad is fragile. Her twin sister (Wren) has moved on from fandom, but Cath still loves it. The book had some plot points that were smart, and some are not the best choice. This book is by Rainbow Rowell, and after reading her book Eleanor and Park, I was a little disappointed. I annotated on appearances, which may not have been the most prominent theme in the book, and I had a hard time annotating it. Below are my annotations:

Annotations:

I notice Cath is very shy about her appearance, maybe I’ll annotate that…. Page 15.

Cath cares what everyone thinks of her. Page 15

She cares what Reagan thinks of her. Page 38

Cath cares about what the people who read her fan fiction think of her. Page 51

When Cath meets the girl who is a fan of her fan fiction, she doesn’t tell her she writes it because she is scared of what she will think of her. Page 202.

Cath even cares what her boyfriend thinks of her. Page 290

The Haunting Of Hill House:

Haunting-of-Hill-House

Review

I love the author Shirley Jackson, and when I saw her name on the reading list, I knew immediately that I had to read her book. I have read her short story the Yellow Wallpaper, and could easily say it was my favorite short story. But this book has to be my favorite thing written by her so far. When I first started reading this, I took note of the characters personalities. As time progressed in the book, their traits have a humungous change. If only could use adjectives to describe the book, they would be haunting and marvelous. The way the author takes something like a haunted house that is so cliche and turns it into such a perfect portrayal of reality is unreal. Below are my notes that are organized by person.

Annotations:

  1. Dr. Montague

Not respected. Page 1

Won’t beg

Wants to find history of house

Careful. Page 2

Intelligent. Page 48

Control Freak. Page 84

A little insane. Page 99

Obsessive. Page 100

Not as afraid of the house. Page 106

Lazy. Page 112

Terrified. Page 130

  1. Eleanor:

Loner. Page 3

Full of hate

Depressed

Does not care for anyone. Page 7

Dead inside. Page 12

Already hates the house. Page 16

Intelligent. Page 48

Lazy. Page 68

Dizzy. Page 83

Slightly Insane. Page 97

A little Insane. Page 99

Childish. Page 104

Not fearing the house. Page 106

Fears the house again. Page 108

Defensive.

Outsider. Page 109

Lonely. Page 110

Lazy. Page 112

Wants to kill Theodora. Page 117

Insane. Page 131

Insane. Page 171

Obsessed with the house. Page 177

Absolutely Insane

  1. Theodora:

Joyful. Page 4

Excited. Page 4

Happy. Page 32

Light. Page 34

Intelligent. Page 48

Hard Worker. Page 68

Slightly insane. Page 97

A little insane. Page 99

Childish. Page 104

Lonely. Page 110

Lazy. Page 112

Hysterical. Page 116

Insane. Page 131

Doesn’t like Eleanor. Page 156

  1. Luke:

Thief. Page 5

Liar. Page 5

Intelligent. Page 28

Brave. Page 102

Childish. Page 104

A little insane. Page 104

Lonely. Page 106

Lazy. Page 11

Coward. Page 137

  1. Hill House:

Lifeless. Page 23

Hated, Scared. Page 24

A little good. Page 37

Disturbed. Page 51

Insane. Page 52

Everything Leads To You

everything leads to you

Review

I am finding making a review on this book almost impossible. I have conflicting feelings about this book, and it is really hard to have an opinion on it. The plot is about a girl who graduated high school, living at her brother’s house while he is away. She designs sets for movies. She finds a note in a house leading to the great granddaughter of a deceased movie star, who has no idea of her grandparents. While this happens, she is put as the production designer of a touching movie called yes and yes. She got the job from her ex-girlfriend Morgan. Ava has a mom that she ran away from, and when she confronts her again, all the emotion of the book just disappears. The book is very emotional, and what should be the most emotional scene of the book, is actually such a letdown. The author doesn’t describe any feelings, just dialogues. The dialogues are missing emotion and are disappointing. Throughout the book, some of the emotions in this just flow and work, while some try too hard. Themes in this book are hard to describe, and I couldn’t find a theme that stays prominent. Themes come and go, making annotations are hard to do. Also, I didn’t have a pen, so annotations were almost impossible. That is why I didn’t annotate this.

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings

I know why the caged bird sings

Review

Trying to explain my feelings while reading this book is almost the same as trying to explain life. Almost impossible. But I am going to try. The plot is about a black girl growing up in the times of racism, around World War 2. I am going to start my explanation with one word: flow. Now, something that makes me know I like a book is that I am so into it I am rooting for everything to turn out right. I wasn’t in this book. I was rooting for the plot. If things had to go bad, I was fine with that I was just rooting for the interesting plot to continue. The book just had this flow to it, that even if you don’t like the book, you were interested if that makes any sense. I wanted to know what happened next. Something about this flow didn’t make me want to stop and annotate. Maybe I wasn’t wrapped up in the book, but stopping this flow to take notes just seemed horrible. Still, I did and below are my notes:

Annotations

Segregation. Page 1

Would like to be white. Page 3

More segregation. Page 13

Race is a big theme. Page 14

Religion plays a major role. Page 41

A lot of prejudice. Page 50

Is she rebellious or dangerous? Page 66

Even general stores are segregated. Page 102

She cares for Bailey more than herself. Page 121

Religion=Theme. Page 123

She is finally okay with her color. Page 126

Religion again. Page 161

The family is a theme. Page 163

Racism. Page 177

More racism. Page 188

Religion is less important. Page 202

Less Racism. Page 210

Now everyone is lonely together. Page 248

She has no more friends. Page 256

The Savage Song:

this savage song

One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest:

one flew over the cuckoo's nest

(I lost the copy of the book that I annotated, which held my review in the back)

Like No Other:

Like no other

True Letters From a Fictional Life:

true-letters from a fictional life

P.S. I Like You:

ps i like you

My Favorite Project

This year my favorite project was the illuminated letter. I liked how creative we could be even though we had some perimeters. I think something that I liked that might just concern me is that I really liked painting.

Tilda Illumination

Some of My Poems I Wrote This Year

Recently in class we have been writing poetry. We have been exploring many styles, and what makes poetry poetry. Below I have five different poems, in five different styles. One of the five I am going to share in front of parents, classmates and teachers.

My Haiku – The Koala Kall

A haiku is a short poem, the first line having 5 syllables, the second 7, and the last 5 again. It is really hard in my opinion to express your ideas in that little room. My poem is about my hat. Here it is below:

Don’t mess with my hat

I’ll find you, and make sure you’re

Brutally murdered

My Personification Poem – Hi Rock

A personification poem is when you describe a non-human object as a human. My poem is about a rock. I wrote this on the first day we learned poetry, but have never stopped editing it.

Some people say you’re dull

I say they’re wrong

For you’re the most interesting rock I’ve ever met

They don’t know that

Yet

 

You were part of a castle

Part of the rocks surrounding the moats

You guarded that moat

You stayed strong when enemies tried to break in

You never cracked under pressure

Get It?

 

You watched the prince

Step on your smooth surface

As he ran to war

Without you,

He would of fallen

 

You travelled in the ocean for decades

But I can’t tell

No one can

Because you’re a rock

 

You don’t look interesting

All grey and boring

That’s okay

Grey’s my favorite color

 

Now here you sit

On the warm sand

Waiting,

For your next adventure

 

Maybe I’ll go with you

And I’ll tell people about your journeys

And people will know the rock

That sat on the beach

Waiting,

For someone to come

And hear your story

 

And people will listen to your story

And care too

Because I think on the inside

Everyone has a little piece of rock

With their own stories

Where they saved the castle

 

They’re just waiting for someone

To find it on the beach

Pick it up

And listen to them

As they tell their stories

Just like You

My Memory Poem – Faceless

A memory poem is when you write about a memory. This poem is about when Grace and I took a picture of our shadows on the beach using my Polaroid camera.

Sometimes so much easier than words,

The flash captures the uncertainty of speech

From my little polaroid camera

Light blue like the chirping birds

 

The camera spits out the photo

Blank and new,

Featureless

 

Slowly, two stains appear

Side by side

Spreading across the light surface

It’s me and Grace,

Shadows on sand

 

Next the tide lines take shape

Smoothing out the rough sand

Quiet art

Calmly, the trees arrive

Dividing heavens from shadows

My Rumi Poem – Invisible Home

This is one of my favorite poems I have ever wrote. It is in the style of Rumi. I would of shared it, but I don’t think it represents my style of writing.

The one who loves has no interest in materials

Lovers have only interest in thought

Nothing needed

 

Lovers have no food in their baskets,

But yet are always full

 

Without legs they can walk

Farther than beasts

Breathing reality

They move forward

They walk until they find nonexistence

And they make their homes

My Apology Poem – Sorry 🙂

An apology poem is where you apologize for something you are actually not sorry for. I am going to share it for our poetry breakfast.

I’m sorry

I know you wanted a fry

They were so golden,

Crunchy

My Ideal Idealism

 

I know you begged,

And I would’ve too

It was heaven,

Hiding in a

Greasy,

Tempting,

Paper bag.

 

The fry was so perfect,

If you had just one a bite,

You would be on Cloud 9,

And you would get why I didn’t share.

 

I understand I owe you money,

But I owe you a dollar

That fry was equal to so much more

I mean, you would understand if you had one

Sorry ‘bout that

 

But if I’m honest,

Not sharing

Was the best,

Most excellent

Choice

I’ve ever

Made.

 

Sorry

🙂