I have currently finished chapter 3. With chapter 4 I wanted to try something different. With this new chapter, I will be trying a close third-person narrative. So far it has been going fairly well with the new style and it feels more natural. The comedy and jokes are a little easier as well because I am looking into the minds of the characters.

I also went to a webinar and got some interesting advice about worldbuilding. They talked about how you should never have every single thing explained in your world. You need to leave some imagination for the reader. They also talked about how the writer may have every little detail in their head, but they must be patient in how the story progresses.

I recently had some feedback at the beginning of chapter 4 from my cohort. It honestly was not bad at all and was very helpful. I got a lot of good feedback on the close third-person narrative. It seems I was able to get my message across very well which is very nice to hear. I am hoping to have a close third-person narrative with each character.