Farm Poem

Farm

 

Leaves drop spring water.

Horses eating their fodder.

The day gets hotter.

 

I didn’t really have any inspiration behind this poem. I just sort of wrote stuff and it turned out to be this. It is a haiku. It has elements of rhyme and beat. I like this poem because of it’s clever rhyming. I think that I could improve it by using more descriptive language in the first words of the lines.

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