In my essay I feel like some of my best work was shown when I shared my own opinion on certain things like when I started my conclusion. I know some of my weaknesses is that I have the tendency to say things like “kinda” and “like” a lot in my essays and I sometimes forget that my job is to try and prove a point.
Next time I definitely need to remember and make a note to myself to not say “kinda” and “like” and to not sound unsure.
