Arabian Nights Piece

When writing an Arabian Nights story we learned what revision is. Revision is not as much as technical errors but more as how your sentences are written like is it descriptive or did I explain this enough. When I was revising I found a lot of places were I could of expanded more on what I had wrote. After revising your piece is a lot more interesting and better.

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  1. Hi Eli. There are a few typos in this digital portfolio post. (For example, it should be “where” instead of “were”.)

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