My American Born Chinese Essay Writing

In my American Born Chinese essay, I think I crafted an effective thesis and have referred back to it in my body paragraphs, but could’ve added on to my analysis and pushed my thesis more in my body paragraphs. My thesis was clear and got my point across, and I referred to it multiple times in my body paragraphs. But at the same time, I could’ve pushed my ideas further in my analysis and made my body paragraphs stronger.