Alfredo
Alfredo is magenta purple
He’s a cute puppy
He’s a hot summer day
A cool pajama
A soft bed
He’s a fun video game
A plate of awesome cheeseburgers
Beckett is light green
He’s a fun otter
He’s a lot of snow
He’s a red shirt
A cozy bed
He’s a lego guy
He’s a slice of pizza
Cassidy is a bluish green turquoise
She is a cute, fluffy puppy
She is a sunny summer day
She is a soft pajama pant
A cozy comfortable couch
A speedy fast scooter
And a bowl of buttery pasta
Dennis is dark red
He’s a deadly lion
He’s a hot summer
A comfy pair of pjs
A warm bed
He’s a nerf gun
A juicy cheeseburger
Eli is hot purple
He is a cute koala
He is a hot summer day
A cool sneaker
A small chair
He is a lego man
A cooked crab
Ella is light white
She’s a fluffy dog
She’s a sunny fall day
A flowing nightgown
A sturdy desk
She’s a soft stuffed animal
A bowl of spaghetti with clams and a white wine sauce
Grace is turquoise blue
She’s a cute dog
She likes rainbows after it rains
She likes soft PJs
She likes to sit on her couch
She likes to play on her kindle
She likes chewy steak
Jett
Jett is dark blue
He’s a German Shepherd
He’s snowing day
A pair of pjs
An Xbox
A french fries
Kate is baby pink
She’s a fluffy dog
She’s a breezy fall morning
A floral print dress
A soft cozy bed
She’s a round hula hoop
A crunchy piece of broccoli
He is a gold heart
An energetic dog
And a cold winter
He’s a pair of soft pajamas
A sturdy table
A long shooting water gun
A long stack of ribs
Myles is a snake made out of gold
In the summer
With sweatpants on
Myles goes to someone’s house
He saw a couch
An iPad with
Pizza
Ren is light blue
She’s a tame cheetah
She’s a warm summer
Some white shorts
A big fluffy beanbag
She’s a playful iPad
A plate of yummy sushi
Rubie is colorful
She’s a rare tiger
She’s a warm comfy bed
A pretty light blouse
A magical fairy
And likes yummy mac and cheese
Shoshi is turquoise blue
A soft dog
A fuzzy pajama pant
Like a fluffy pancake
She’s a bouncy pingpong ball
She’s yellow sunshine
A comfortable couch
I’m lime green
I’m a crazy monkey
i’m like cozy winters
And warm pajamas
I like to chill on any comfy couch
My monkey Bobo chills with me
I love yummy peanut butter and jelly sandwiches
Tess is sky blue
She’s a loud stomping elephant
A hot summer day
A soft colorful t-shirt
She’s a big fluffy bed
A fun surfboard
A light fluffy croissant
Verity is dark purple
She’s a cute otter
She’s a white snow
A purple pajamas
A warm bed
She’s a purple paint
A pepperoni pizza
Violet is blank white waiting to be explored
She’s a playful otter in the water
She’s a snowy day full of excitement
A silky pajama nightgown in the dawn
A bumpy beanbag in a cozy room
She’s a lively Shirley Temple doll on a summer day
A box of juicy blueberries ready for anything
Zach is turquoise
Zach is a fast chinchilla
Zach is as warm as a warm summer
Zach is as soft as cozy pajamas
Zach feels like a soft bed
Zach is smaller than a mini iPad
Zach is wider than pasta
From Beckett’s Mom: I love all of the 4th grade poems. I feel like I have a great sense of who all of the children are! The descriptions were so fun! I look forward to more blog posts!
I remember this from the begining of the year. I really liked it.
I really like how these poems really explain how that person feels about certain things.
I really liked every ones but Alfredo’s really stuck out to me because I agree with every thing he wrote besides for cheeseburgers being his favorite food, (I hate cheeseburgers!)
I really liked how the poems explain so much about each person without using realistic things. For example, you are not a crazy monkey but sometimes you act like one. It gives a good idea about what you are talking about.
I loved all of the poems. I think we have evolved from this to more “advanced” writing.
My opinion has changed a lot over the year. I would have done Tess is a sunset orange. Tess is a swimming sea turtle. Tess is a cool spring day. Tess is a soft sweatshirt. Tess is a soft big bed. Tess is a fun surf board. Tess is an ice cool popsicle.
I love these because it really expresses who we are in poetry. I think all the poems are beautiful. Bravo!
I cant believe it is already the last day of school. That moment feels like yesterday! Its so funny to think of the very first day of fourth grade, on practically the last!