JJL6 Hanna and Ciro

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   20cirob - November 18th, 2013 at 2:15 pm none Comment author #319 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   YAY!!!

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   20cirob - November 18th, 2013 at 2:15 pm none Comment author #320 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   we did good!

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   20wiltonb - November 18th, 2013 at 2:15 pm none Comment author #321 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   Very good, but a little loud. Keep doing this!

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   20grahamf - November 18th, 2013 at 2:17 pm none Comment author #322 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   Atfirst the male chatacter said he didn’t hear about it but then he puts in a lot of things that happened.

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   20janeo - November 18th, 2013 at 2:17 pm none Comment author #323 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   I like your video it explains the conflict really well and it is really detailed!

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   20pierrer - November 18th, 2013 at 2:18 pm none Comment author #324 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   I think this video is very clear and concise but the voices are a little hard to understand. You also repeated things over again.

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   Bay Dotson - November 18th, 2013 at 2:18 pm none Comment author #325 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   I like how the characters both have dialouge.

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   20maisyh - November 18th, 2013 at 2:18 pm none Comment author #326 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   There wasn’t really a resolution, so I think it didn’t make as much sense as it could have.

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   20nissimh - November 18th, 2013 at 2:18 pm none Comment author #327 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

   Smart idea for the conflict. Good job showing the conflict

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    20coopers - November 18th, 2013 at 2:19 pm none Comment author #328 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

    I think that you showed the characters very well

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    20thibaudr - November 18th, 2013 at 2:19 pm none Comment author #329 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

    I didn’t understand why one of the characters said in the beginning, “no what happended.” and then talked about what happened later on.

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    Eli Bunnell - November 18th, 2013 at 2:19 pm none Comment author #330 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

    This was nice. I liked how they BOTH told the story, not just one.,

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    20dakotal - November 18th, 2013 at 2:19 pm none Comment author #331 on JJL6 Hanna and Ciro by Adolescent Issues

    It was intresting on how they were talking about Clay and Kenzie and Chelsea. I really liked how they were talking about how Chelsea handled Kenzie. Very different from how the people in my video would handle her.

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