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Audrey Hepburn.
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The person I admire most in the world is Audrey Hepburn. She was an actress who was most famous in 1950-60. When Audrey was 10, her family moved to Holland because of World War II. After the war she moved to England with her mother. In less than ten years, she became one of the most well known actresses. The movie she is most famous for is called Breakfast at Tiffany’s. After she retired, she decided to help a company called UNICEF. The reason I admire her is because, not only she was an amazing actress, but she also did lot’s of good in the world.
“I never think of myself an icon, I just do my thing.”- Audrey Hepburn
Clair
October 6, 2014 at 5:58 pm (10 years ago)Zoe,
I love Audrey Hepburn, too! Great reasons (and a wonderful picture.) A couple of things:
-There’s some extra words in the second sentence (you don’t need the ” in the”)
-“In fewer than ten years” should be “In less than ten years”
Make these two small tweaks and update your post and you’ll be all set!
-Clair