June 5

My Rumi Poem

For one of our harder assignments we were asked to write a poem in the style of one of the most famous poets of all time, Rumi. For our Rumi poems we had to go to a site online and read through some of his poems. Then we had to chose a poem that we liked and then we had to write our own version of the poem, but with our own wording. The reason that I found this harder to complete than some of the others was because I found that the wording and symbolism that he used in his poems where actually harder to master than it looked like. The poem that I chose to imitate was a poem about life and asking why cling to life if it hurts to when you will be brought back in a different form when you die.

So here it is:

Do You Need To hold on to It?(My Poem in the Style of Rumi)

By Gus Dotson

 

Do you need to hold on to it?

It is worn and wasted

You have torn and ripped it

It is ragged and useless

 

Why hold onto it

The wind will take your soul

And you will live on

One life, Then another and another

 

You could live on in happiness

Never ending peace

You could be calm

You would never have to cripple and crinkle

You would never die

So why hold on?

 


Posted June 5, 2016 by Gus in category Classes, Edson, Grade, Humanities, Sixth, Teacher

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I'm Gus Dotson, I am interested in woodworking

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