China Trip Reflection
One of my favorite parts of the China trip was the school visit. It was really cool learn what school is like in different cultures. When you are on vacation with your family you don’t usually o to see other schools which made it even cooler. Another thing that was really cool to see was the great wall because thing like it doesn’t really exist in the US because we were created as a country later on and therefore don’t have as many ancient structures. In also the Idea that they build it all by manpower without the help of machines. They had to move all the supplies to the top of the mountain and them build the wall.
My ABC Essay
One thing that I think I did well while writing my essay was choosing evidence that really proved the point I was trying to make. this is important in an essay because the whole point is that you are proving a point. One thing I could have done better on was checking my work and editing because if I had edited I would have gotten a better grade.
Winter Break
Over winter break I went skiing at Otis Ridge Ski Mountain. I learned how to powder ski and how to do freestyle jumps off of rocks and snow banks. I also spent time with a friend of mine that I haven’t seen in a while, we went and saw two movies and played on the frozen lake behind his house. I also had a massive nerf battle at my mom’s friend from high school’s house.
Fencing
For the past 7 months, I have been fencing at a club called The Fencers Club. It is the oldest fencing academy in the USA. I fence a sword called Epee. Ruby Wexler also fences epee with the same coach but she has been fencing for a year and a few months so she is at a higher level than me. Io fences at the same club but she fences a different sword so we don’t fence together very often. It is kind of funny that I’m writing this today because I just broke my blade yesterday and I have to get it replaced.
My Photoshop Project
To make my poster I took a photo while riding on a ferry on the way back from the beach. Then I masked out the water and replaced it with a photo of lava flowing down the side of a mountain and put it where the water used to be. Once I had replaced the water I took a photo of a person paddle boarding on calm water and masked that out and put it on top of the lava. I made sure to include the shadow to make the person more realistic. After all that was done I added smoke on top so that it looked like the person was paddle boarding on the side of subterranean volcano. I think that the shadows reallt make it look real because the sun is setting so if they weren’t there it would kind of kill the vibe.
My Book Talk
My Book Talk:
Name: 2016
Humanities
What are the components of a thorough, concise BOOK TALK?
Directions: When creating a book talk, use this helpful template to organize your ideas. Simply fill in what you’d like to say in the space below for each section.
Grabber:
When you were little did you ever want to be a pirate and find buried treasure? Well you are not alone, so did Jim Hawkins, the son of a poor tavern owner back in the 1700s. Jim’s life changed forever thanks to a retired pirate that showed up at the family’s tavern. This all happens in “Treasure Island” by Robert Louis Stevenson, first published in 1883, and still one of the most famous adventure stories ever.
Plot Summary:
One of the interesting features of this book is that you can already tell how it ends after reading the very first sentence but it still is entertaining and keeps you on the edge of your seat through the entire book. Jim Hawkins is hired by Billy Bones, the former pirate staying at his family’s inn called the Admiral Benbow, to look out for his old crewmates. Billy Bones is described as, “A tall, strong, heavy, nut brown man; his tarry pig-tail falling over the shoulders of his soiled blue coat; his hands ragged and scarred, with black, broken nails, and the sabre cut across one cheek, a dirty, livid white.” (Ch. 1, Treasure Island) After Billy Bones is killed by his former crewmates, who have sneaked past his lookouts, Jim looks through the sailor’s possessions and finds a treasure map in his sea chest. Jim brings it to Squire Trelawney, a rich gentleman who owns a large estate near the Admiral Benbow, and the town’s doctor, Dr. Livesey. They plan a trip to sea to find the treasure indicated on the map. When they get to the island where the treasure is located, there is a mutiny led by the ship’s cook, Long John Silver, who turns the honest shiphands into pirates. The lives of the squire, Doctor, and a marooned sailor found on the island all depend on Jim. Throughout the book, the idea of treasure and the greed it inspires plague the minds of both the pirates and the honest men. All but Jim.
Reading Strategy (with textual evidence)
This book is practically one giant conflict, a conflict that is all about power. He who hold the treasure map is esentialy the bulleye for each of these treasure hungry pirates. The book starts with the conflict of Billy Bones and and his retired crew mates. Billy Bones was a high ranking pirate and was feared by most sailors. But he goes to stay at the Hawkins’ tavern and is then attacked by past crew mates and ends up dead. This is the reason that Jim found the treasure map, which leads to the second conflict over power. When the crew sets sail in an effort to find the bounty on treasure island, the ship’s cook, Long John Silver, starts a mutiny and takes over the ship. And the only honest men are the doctor, the squire, the captain, the squires servants and most important, Jim Hawkins. Jim Hawkins has to perservier and survive in the face of mutanice pirates. “Through all this snearing talk I was made to feel the threat of death that overhung me, and my cheeks burned and my heart beat painfully in my breast… ‘Well,’ says I, growing a bit bolder, ‘ if I’m to chose, I declare I have a right to know what’s what, and why you are here, and where my friends are.’” page 399 of Treasure Island. This shows how even though Jim is scared and in a terrible situation he is able to stick up for himself and look danger in the eye. All the men including pirates and honest men rely on Jim and his wits, to get them out of the pickle they are in.
Recommendation:
If you have enjoyed reading books with children as protagonists in adult situations, like Tom Sawyer, Alex Rider or CHERUB, then I highly recommend this book. The main character, Jim Hawkins, is a boy around the age of twelve or thirteen, who is faced with many challenges where his decisions and actions drive the story’s plot and affect the lives of the other grown-up characters. Also, if you are someone who likes pirate movies, like Pirates of the Caribbean, The Princess Bride or even Peter Pan, then you will be able to relate to this book because it is action-packed and you can almost see it playing through your head like a movie as you read it. The memorable characters, exciting action and classic story of good versus evil make Treasure Island one of the best-loved adventure stories of all time. Just to put it out there this a book that will especially appeal to readers that like challenging vocabulary and traditional pirate vernacular.
An African In New York
My Piece:
Name: Gus Dotson March 2017
Humanities Africans in NY: Creative Narrative Assignment
The Dancing King
I remember the boat, the smells, the scent of death and rotting feces. I saw friends and enemies die in their shackles around me. I remember when those phantoms first came to our country. I remember when I first saw one of the dreaded fire sticks that could shoot a rock faster than a bow could shoot an arrow. I wish I could forget, but I will never forget the sight of sickly looking men with sticks that shot fire killing my poppa. I remember the blood spraying onto me. I remember the way my father charged them with his axe and fought to save my mother and me. I shall never forget watching from that death trap of a ship as my beloved Guinea beach disappeared. Often on Pinkster I will first visit the beach here on Long Island because, although it is not like the beach in my beloved Guinea, it still has that connection to my home and my soul that was left when those white men got me.
I have an okay life on Long Island. My master, Frederick DeVoo is a butcher and owns a 20 acre farm. My master sees that I am loyal and smart and he has been kind to me. He gives me decent food and a day off every six weeks unless there is a holiday, in which case I get that for my day off. I have been owned by him since I was thirteen. My momma lived and worked here with me until a year or two ago when she died. Lately my master Mr. DeVoo has taken to having me dance in front of his stall in the markets so as to attract buyers. The other slaves will sometimes hold dancing competitions in the markets on holidays and the winner will get a pie or some money. I am quite a good dancer thanks to my momma. I’m said to be so good that folks in the market call me “The Dancing King”. I am famous with people of all races that go to the market. I Feel as though I have triumphed over my master for he does not beat me but is kind and lets me live as a human rather than as chattel. Many of the other slaves in the market are treated like animals by their owners. My name is Jack DeVoo the king of the beach and dancing
Crusible Comparative Essay
One of our classes main projects in humanities has been essay writing and the finer points involved in a high quality essay. We have learned the basic components and how to work them into nicer sounding words. Our fist essay in this form was about the first book we read that year. This essay is about the most recent book we have read called The Crusible by Aurthur miller.
Here is the essay split into the basic components:
Outline for Crucible/McCarthy Comparative Essay
Theme: scapegoating
Paragraph #1: Introductory Paragraph (GIT)
Grabber Statement (G):
Just because of the color of your skin or your beliefs you can be marginalized by those in power and blamed for things you didn’t do.
Introduction of Theme (I):
Throughout history people have been scapegoated and marginalized because of their gender, their race or their beliefs. People in power wish to have an unblemished reputation so they blame minority’s for their problems.
Thesis Statement (T):
Throughout history people in power have scapegoated minorities and blamed them for their problems. Often times they were blamed because of their beliefs or because of the color of their skin.
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Paragraph #2: Crucible Thematic Connection
Topic Sentence (T):
In the Crucible by Arthur Miller when people are scapegoated they immediately put the blame on others because they don’t want the spotlight on themselves and wish to escape the oppression that is shed on them.
Explanatory Sentence (E):
What this means is that one person will blame someone for something they didn’t do because they are trying to redirect the blame onto someone else. Tituba does this to other poor, disempowered women in the play.
Evidence (E):
“And I look—and there was Goody Good and Goody Osburn,” (Miller, p. 63–65).
Analysis (A):
This shows that when one person is scapegoated they will scapegoat others so they can step out of the spotlight.This cycle of blame continues because of the fear that is created by the people in power.
Concluding/ Transition (C):
It is said that history repeats itself and I believe this because in the 1950s, about 258 years after the Salem witch trials there was an event very similar
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Paragraph #3: McCarthy/Red Scare Thematic Connection
Topic Sentence (T):
During the Red Scare, as in the salem witch hunts, many people were wrongfully scapegoated and blamed by rich or powerful people for things that they hadn’t done because of their country of origin or because of their beliefs.
Explanatory Sentence (E):
This means that a person would be blamed for committing a crime, because they are part of a minority group, even though they hadn’t actually done anything wrong.
Evidence (E):
There were many corrupt government officials that supported these actions, “J. Edgar Hoover… rounded up hundreds of russian immigrants… many of them had done nothing wrong.”
Analysis (A):
What this means is that these russians were rounded up and punished even though they hadn’t done anything wrong. These acts of discrimination have been going on for an unimaginably long time and range from racism to sexism and beyond.
Concluding/ Transition (C):
Thought the problem of scapegoating was prominent during the Red Scare it is still very clear today and is reflected a lot in our new president’s actions.
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Paragraph #4: Modern Day Witch Hunt Thematic Connection
Topic Sentence (T):
Due to the recent election, the United States Of America has elected a president that has scapegoated people that are of latin american descent because he wishes to have, as Arthur Miller says, an “all white name”.
Explanatory Sentence (E):
Trump doesn’t value diversity and difference and wishes to seem all good and flawless.
Evidence (E):
Tumpo has cracked down on law enforcement in a racist way, “… It translates to the unwarranted and illegal targeting of people because of their race, because of their language, because of the color of their skin.”
Analysis (A):
This quote shows that ICE officers are racially profiling and unfairly arresting people based on the color of their skin or the language they are speaking. It is a fact that many of the people they are arresting are from countries in latin america because people of Latin american descent tend to have different colored skin (NOT all but some). The ICE officers are less diligent on european immigrants or immigrants will lighter skin.
Concluding/ Transition (C):
Scapegoating is like a plague in our society and is terrible and unfair thing.
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Paragraph #5: Concluding Paragraph (ROC)
Reflection on Thesis (R):
Scapegoating has always been a problem and will always be one because people wish to be perfect and when they screw up they wish to have someone else to blame
Overview of Main Points (O):
No matter if it was two hundred years ago during the Salem witch trials, if it was during the red scare and McCarthy era or if it was yesterday it is still a problem and is very unfair.
Concluding Idea (C):
Imagine if you were blamed for murder and treason because of the color of your skin? Imagine being marginalized because of your beliefs or because of your gender? Would you like it? I think not.