Poetry: Invisible Home

Invisible Home

 

Broken

Crashing

Falling

Nothing left to hold up the walls

But love and hope

 

Only one other care in the world

That’s not themselves

 

Broken houses

With only invisible walls

Made of  hope and happiness

 

And sometimes the people

With the least

Will have the biggest smiles

 

An element I found in my poem is line breaks. I use found repetition when I say hope and broken. I liked how my poem turned out but I changed it a lot from when I wrote it.

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