I feel that for my essay I felt that I did a good job but when I was handed back my paper it wasn’t what I was expecting. I think that I am still getting used to the new way of writing essays. I think that something that brought my grade down was that I didn’t properly introduce the characters of the book. It is something that often can be found in my essays. I believe that when writing it I often assume that the reader already knows who I am talking about and when I do that it confuses the reader I think that when revising it I should focus on that.