I think this essay was not the best essay I’ve written. At first it was kind of simple, so then I edited it again and it kind of got mixed around, and then edited it again and was a bit confusing. I think I did well on separating the paragraphs and focusing on two different topics of rejection of self. But I think I have to work on placing the paragraphs and not mixing them around, introducing the characters, and jumping to different topics. I also think that I could add more description to my analysis and describing more about the evidence I put in before.