This poem is called the Yellow Brick Road, it is a rhythmic poem. I got inspired to write about a character, so Olivia B and I wrote about Dorothy. There is a lot of imagery, and line breaks. I really like this poem because you can separate each little section and it can be it’s own, but also when you put it together it will go well all together.
Walking down the yellow brick road
After the Wicked Witch showed
With the broomstick she rode
And laughing like a toad
Stopped by a scarecrow, on my way
He was clumsy, and made of hay
He wanted a brain to think in such a way
But that day was not today
In the distance, we see a shimmer
It is a glowing tin man, whose shimmer gets dimmer
We pour some oil on his rust
That slowly turns into dust
He is so hollow, in need of trust
We will get him a heart, for love, we must
On our way to the Emerald City
I had to start being witty
When a cowardly lion came acting like a kitty
He needed some courage to feel pretty
I see a field of flowers
I think poppies might have some powers
The last time I slept wasn’t for hours
Then the witch and her monkeys said, “The flowers are ours!”
My eyelids have froze
I think I am starting to dose
I will be back before the light will dispose
Let’s hope the gates won’t close
We just woke up
We’re ready to go in
So is Toto my pup
Everyone has a grin
We walk through the gates
It’s a wonderful sight
We hope our wishes will be granted
At least before tonight
The wizard is a fright
He says that by tonight
He needs the broom from the witch of the west
How will we get it? She is such a pest
We sneak in the tower
But I get caught
I hope that Scarecrow, Lion, and Tin Man
don’t miss their shot
I am stuck with the witch
But my friends act quick
They break through the door
Luckily I can run as fast as her broomstick
She follows me down the staircase
I see a pail filled with water
I see her ugly face
So I splash her and she melts
I can’t spot her!
Back to the wizard we go
With her broomstick in hand
With the Lion, Tin Man, And Scarecrow
We have finished what we have planned