Revision means to fix things like show don’t tell, run on sentences and using better vocabulary, not mechanics. You’re fixing details to make the story or writing piece better.

I think my story is good. I fixed a lot of big things in my piece like deleting a whole paragraph and adding more to another paragraph. I think my story reflects a lot back to Arabian Nights because I mention a few characters and objects from the stories. I revised a lot, fixing a lot of show don’t tells and vocabulary.