Revision means to fix things like show don’t tell, run on sentences and using better vocabulary, not mechanics. You’re fixing details to make the story or writing piece better.
I think my story is good. I fixed a lot of big things in my piece like deleting a whole paragraph and adding more to another paragraph. I think my story reflects a lot back to Arabian Nights because I mention a few characters and objects from the stories. I revised a lot, fixing a lot of show don’t tells and vocabulary.
26) 40=20% of _____
40=20%X_____
40 ÷.2=200
Story Problem- I picked 40 apples from the tree, 40 equals 20% of the apples on the tree. What is the amount of apples on the tree?
27) 8 1/2% of 500=____
.085 X 500=42.5
Story Problem- Olivia had 8 1/2% of the cupcakes to bring to the party, in total there were 500 chocolaty delicious cupcakes. How much is 81/2% of them?
28) 18=___% of 150
18=___%X 150
18 ÷ 150=12%
Story Problem- Tilda has 150 bottles of ketchup, Stella borrowed 18 bottles of them. What percent of the bottles of ketchup did Stella have?
This is my illuminated letter. We looked online at different ones and then used those as an inspiration for our letter. Most of the time Illuminated letters are used as the first letter of a story. They are the big letter at the beginning of the stories. 
On Friday we went to the cloisters museum. My favorite piece of art was the narwal tusk, I never knew that they might have actually exist. It relates to social studies because there was a lot of artwork from the medeval time period. Some sculptures of people had some diseases from the plague. Like there were some bumps on their legs called boboes. Normally I don’t like museums, but this one was pretty fun.