This summer was amazing! For the first half of the summer I went to my sleep away camp , Wavus camp for girls, for 3 1/2 weeks! I saw a bunch of my old friends from last year and met new friends! That picture is from our trip to Mt. Blue State Park in Maine. After camp, I went to the Hamptons for the rest of the summer! I learned how to surf, I got a boogie board, and I saw my family and friends. Overall, it was the best summer ever.
That sounds like an amazing summer, Olivia! And I love the picture. There’s one small typo/space issue in the second sentence– can you spot it? Make that correction and you’ll be all set.