Oliver’s Essay Writing

My essay writing style focuses heavily on the analysis and critical thinking. I have written my essays like this for years. For this essay I focused more on everything else. I feel as if my critical thinking was not as powerful as my best work could be. I think that this is a result of me choosing a theme that is too simplistic for my liking. I would improve this by sharpening up the language that I am using in the essay. For example, my thesis not complex enough to fully represent what I was trying to convey in my essay. The way I wrote my PTI essay was similar to how I normally write my essays. I thought I did a solid job, considering the difficulty of the topic I chose.