Month: December 2014

     I invented a super cool and easer bathroom. this helps people because lets say you went to the bathroom and you didn’t want to get off your toilet to go wash your hands and the toilet would move you to the sink and you could wash your hands on the toilet.

1.I hate the rats because when you walk under scaffolding and you see a rat scurrying right by your feet it scares me to death.

2.I hate the steam that come out of the grids because it makes me feel uncomfortable because its like some doing something mysteries under the grids.

3. I hate the garbage because that is why all the rats come.

4. I hate the drips of water from the air-condition machines because it is like something random is dripping on your head.

My fingers tapped on the fire button as fast as they could go. They were making the sound of an army plane firing its bullets. I was at my aunt’s house and it was Thanksgiving. I was playing Galaga, a game from the 70’s and 80’s that my dad played a lot. I was playing with my aunt’s friend Bob and he is good. I was playing Galaga and I was really far into the space game. I got this far because my fighter jet got captured by an alien and I killed the alien and got my jet back. Since I had an extra big jet I was going into the challenge stage. The challenge stage is where you can’t die and you just get points, but let’s get back to the story. So, because I had a extra big jet I killed every single alien and I got a bunch of points. After that I got really far and I broke Bob’s record. When I broke Bob’s record it felt awesome. Bob told me,  “You are really good at Galaga but I will break your record soon” [which he did].

My thesis is “Parvana takes a lot of responsibility to help her family.”The first thing of evidence is Parvana takes a lot of responsibility to help her family because she knows she is the only person in her family that is able to go outside. Parvana is so desperate to get money for her family that she even goes to dig up bones to make money for her family. When Parvana goes home and tells about how she got this money she does not get the response she want. “\ you will go back to reading letters! No more of this digging! We don’t need money that badly. NO!” My Quote supported my thesis because when Parvana said no in the quote it shows parvana takes responsibility for her family.   This is my theses.