My Arabian Nights Story

Revision is a step of writing. It isn’t making corrections to mistakes, it is more a change to the plot and story. For example, if you think a certain character should actually do something else, that is a time to revise your story. In my Arabian Nights story, I did a lot of revision. My story is based off the book Arabian Nights, which is about someone named Scheherazade telling stories. My story is as if Scheherazade was telling it. I am very proud of my story. I think my story has a very big element of magic. I also think that my story arc is clear. I also got help from Julia. She told me to take out parts of my story that weren’t needed, and I think that made my story better.I hope you like my story:

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  1. Nice, Margaret. Arabian Nights should be italicized. (I can’t do it in the comments, otherwise I’d italicize it in my comment!)

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