We all worked equally on both parts of the project the newscast and artical. We each wrote about an equal amount and we all had a good part in the movie Ben was Dadi and Liam was grandpa, I was Phulan,Shabanu and, Mama. I would like to give a shout out to Liam for doing all the editing for the video.
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My creative writing piece
I am proud of this piece I like this piece because it was hard to come up with the story but I think that I used my imagination and it really made my piece special.
My arabian nights story
I feel proud of my Arabian Night’s piece because it actully sounds like something I would read in the book.
I think that revision is changing the story not only grammar. It might be to make it more intresting it might be the piece has no story arch. It could be changing a whole paragraph or more. Revising is making a piece better. I think that revision could change your whole piece. And it has nothing to do with grammar! It just makes it more interesting.
The Cloisters
On friday we went to the cloisters. At the Cloisters there was a lot of exquisite medival art. I always found unicorns very cool. I didn’t know that unicorns were so important to medival times. I thought they were just a fantasy. Of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows. I didn’t know they could be so brutal. But I had fun and I saw a lot of intresting art and learned a lot.
Beowulf Annotations
The way we annotated was we wrote a chapter summary in one sentence, circled vocabulary and underlined important parts. We did this so if we needed to go back and find something important we would know what happened in the chapter and then look for it if it was underlined. I am proud of how much vocabulary I learned from this book and how much more advanced my writing and speaking is now. I want to improve on finding the vocab because when I read my brain only thinks about the book not the words.
My reading and writing timeline
Reading and writing timelines is when we made a time line about how we have grown as a reader and writer overtime. We had to have pictures of the book say what age we read it at and why it was a milestone in our reading life.
I am proud of my timeline because it took a lot of time and effort to v what i read what I was 2 and why out of all books that book stood out to me. I also have read so much that I couldn’t decide what to put on my timeline. I also thought that it helped me look back on all of my writing pieces that I am really proud of and I was happy to share my work. My reading and writing timeline makes me proud because I put a lot of work and time into it and it turned out well. It makes me think about all I have accomplished academically and non academically. It is a piece of work I worked hard on and I am proud of it.
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