My arabian nights story

I feel proud of my Arabian Night’s piece because it actully sounds like something I would read in the book.

I think that revision is changing the story not only grammar. It might be to make it more intresting it might be the piece has no story arch. It could be changing a whole paragraph or more. Revising is making a piece better. I think that revision could change your whole piece. And it has nothing to do with grammar! It just makes it more interesting.

Math Problems

  1. 40=20% of ________

20%=.20

40/.20=200

Word problem:

40 people have checked into the hotel today that is only 20% of the people scheduled for check in. How many people are scheduled to check in today?

2.

8 1/2% of $500.00 =___?

8 1/2%=.085

.085 x $500.00=$42.50

Word problem:

Franks budget for a wedding ring for Christie was $500.00 He found a cheap ring that Christie was gonna love for 8 1/2% of his budget. How much was the ring?

3.

18=____% of what number?

18/150

=.12

=12%

Word problem:

At the Broadway show china doll there are 18 people out of 150 seats what percent of the seats are filled?

The Cloisters

On friday we went to the cloisters. At the Cloisters there was a lot of exquisite medival art. I always found unicorns very cool. I didn’t know that unicorns were so important to medival times. I thought they were just a fantasy. Of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows. I didn’t know they could be so brutal. But I had fun and I saw a lot of intresting art and learned a lot.

 

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Writing Reflection

I am proud of my creative writing piece. I thought that it was an example of my best work. I worked very hard on it. I found it to be difficult to find out what you wanted to happen next because it might not make sense. I learned to write a story with more action. So it wasn’t just like a regular persons life or someone’s life who is not regular but there is no action. I think to stay at this level of work I should spend a lot of time and make sure it is  4 worthy. I found describing all the action was difficult because there was a lot going on. I learned that if you add a little bit of action. And I think I can improve on being more descriptive in my action and working on my editing skills.