Dawn

Dawn

I see the sunrise

On the horizon, right here

But so far away

 

I was inspired by the sunrise when I go to the beach. If you sit on the beach you feel like you can see the sun right in front of you and then you remember that it is on the other side of the world. It is a haiku so the line breaks go:

5 syllables

7 syllables

5 syllables

It has line breaks and imagery. I really feel like it is well write and I really like the way it turned out. It really feels true and I like the way it sounds in words.

 

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