Over the summer I went to a sleep away camp called “Camp Tapawingo.” it was my second year at camp and it really helped me grow. Because I went to camp last year I had a jumping off point. So I accomplished more than the previous year. At camp I has taught me that anything is possible if you set your mind to it.
I am writing about all three of your pieces because they are generally short and they have a good amount of info in them although they just say this is what I did and this is what I learned. I think that you could have put some more time effort and thought into it. Just something else, Your third piece turned up as a link.
Also there were a couple of gramatic and spelling errors.