This is what I thought was my finished map project. Then we had critiques and the comments that stood out the most were that it looks unfinished and they can’t tell what the black thing is. It is a ruler, and I think I am going to make it look more like that. I might make the desk seem complete with other things that might be on a desk. I am really proud of it because I think it really is a good way to highlight my project. I think my project represents my view of New York because coffee is everywhere.