May
2016
The Uncertainty
My favorite poem I have written so far is a poem called The Uncertainty. It is about someone who has the task of destroying a spider’s web, but then gets caught up in the beauty of it. I think it is my favorite poem because I spent so much time working on it and I think it really is a great example of my best work. Here it is:
The Uncertainty
It hangs there
Glistening in the sun
I notice the patterns for the first time
Intricate spools of string
Such a heavenly home,
For such a bloodthirsty creature.
Really, the house is a piece of art,
Inhabited by a murderer
The vampire has left the web
With its corpses hanging
Suspended in time
With one flick of a twig
I can destroy this haunted house
Sugar coated
Luring in the innocent.
How can such a deathly spider,
Create such an exquisite web?
A delicate design,
That somehow can catch an army
And imprison souls
I have a decision to make
Do I stop the kills
Of the innocent
But also destroy,
This maleficent palace?
A home
A dungeon
An Obscurity
The process of making this poem was long. First, it took me a while to figure out what I wanted to write about. After that, I had a lot of trouble trying to start it. I kept changing it, but soon I found a beginning I liked. Writing the rest of the poem wasn’t too hard, but then came editing. I edited it over the course of five or more days. The last part was creating a title. My last line is An Obscurity and I thought that would be a good title, but I didn’t want to be too repetitive. I then used Thesaurus to find synonyms and it gave me the word uncertainty and I really liked it, because the poem is about being uncertain if the character should ruin the web. I also liked how it meant obscurity too, without me having to use the word.