I’m very proud of my Giver Essay, I really spent a lot of time trying to get the point across that uniformity does not make an utopia, and I really think I did a good job. For this essay, I also wrote an extra paragraph, which is a bit of a risk, but I am very proud of how it turned out. Overall I think the extra paragraph only improved my essay. We spent a month on this, and even though it was a tedious process, I am very proud of it.