I really like how you posted about a new experience that you had this summer. I think that you picked a really great thing to post about. I also really like how you added in some facts about soccer. One suggestion is that maybe you could have made your post a little bit longer and talked more about where you played soccer.
I really like how you posted about a new experience that you had this summer. I think that you picked a really great thing to post about. I also really like how you added in some facts about soccer. One suggestion is that maybe you could have made your post a little bit longer and talked more about where you played soccer.