So far this year was awesome not very much of the year has passed though. I just started getting real homework such as what I am doing right know.Also the class gets lockers its great I love it. The freedom we have to go around is way better the lower school to me. In less you are late to a class thats not fun. Well thats what I think so far
Hi Emily,
Thanks for sharing! A few quick notes:
-“So far this year was awesome not very much of the year has passed though.” This should be two sentences, or split by a comma. Can you tell where?
-“know.Also” you’re missing a space between the period and the start of the next sentence
-“Also the class gets lockers its great I love it.” should also be two sentences. Its should be “it’s” since you’re saying “it is.”
-“In less you are late to a class thats not fun.” These two thoughts need a comma between them, or to be two sentences. Also “thats” should be “that’s” since you’re saying “that is.”
-“Well thats what I think so far” thats should be “that’s,” and you’re missing a period at the end of the sentence.
Make these few small changes and update your post and you’ll be all set!
Clair