Arabian Nights Story Reflection
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REFLECTION
There are two brothers, Will and Horace, their parent gathered about 20 kingdoms under their strong reign. These two brothers hate each other to the very last thread. One day when Horace decides he has enough, he gathers a army, attacks the castle and leaves. Then —well read to find out—-…
Characters:
- King Merek
- Queen Alianor
- Will
- Horace
- Sister
- General
- Random Kings and Queens
- Servants
Sneak Peak(and setting.)
This story of great woe and battles take place a long time ago in arabia with a king and a queen who bore two twin sons that hated each other from the bottom of their heart. But like most stories, there will be a nice ending.
The kingdom is in peril, the serfs have rebelled against their lords. Kids have rebelled against their parents. Worst of all the brothers of all wealth have rebelled against their rich family. There is no way to stop it but one. This one was is true love. Because most stories should have a good ending, this one will. The two people who are in it are, we find our two main characters, Will and Horace in their home, a long, long time ago, in a land far, far away…
It was a time when the land of Arabia was blessed. There was peace woven all throughout the kingdoms. The serfs and peasants obeyed they nobles, lords, dukes, barons and kings. In the center of the kingdoms there was one greater and more prosperous than all of them. The kingdom of Corépash. It was a combination of 12 kingdoms turned to one by King Merek the great and his wife Queen Alianor the great. These two lovers had conquered all these kingdoms all due to their wits and perseverance. The two great ones (as they were called) had two sons and a daughter, Horace and Will (the daughter wasn’t important.) The two sons of the great ones, took little bits of each of their parents personalities. The first born one, Horace, was the tough and brave person like his father. The other was the kind, witty, easy-flowing, obscenely smart, wise, intelligent and a very handsome person like his mom. These two brothers fought all of the time to win over their parents love and admiration. When Horace was born he stood up and started walking around grabbing a spear from the side of the room and stabbing pillows. When Will was born, he politely motioned for clothes, dressed himself and started singing for his parents, Alianor and Merek. Will was the favorite of the two children and he was always the one to be praised, looked at or known first. Poor Horace just sat out in the corner and skulked about everything that was wrong with him until he found a solution. It took a lot to make this decision, but he had to do it. Quietly for the next month, he gathered and recruited people to his small mini army. A couple of months later, he walked up to the gates of the castle in full armor with 1,000 archers, 3,000 infantry and 1,000 horseback riders. He attacked the castle full on with hundreds of instruments to break the 12 city walls. The walls seemed to hold as if by magic. They were, because Will learned how to do it in his thousands of scrolls that he read about magic. But Will, Horace, the army, the King and Queen and even the townsfolk knew that, the magic couldn’t hold out forever. One night, Horace snuck into the castle, under the cover of darkness with 20 other men and dispersed them throughout the castle telling them to kill anyone they find except, Will, the King, the Queen or the head servants and/or maids, if anyone bowed down to them they took them up in chains, in a procession behind them. When all his men had gone, he went into his brother’s room, to find it all stripped clean, he went to the library(same thing), he went to the academy and every living space, it was all cleared out and nothing was left but a few curses floating around to get rid of Horace. Then he went into the place where he was born, and found his parents sleeping soundly. He made his prayers and then took up his spear and swung it down toward his father’s beating heart. His spear was about to touch the flesh when his arm stopped in midair and his spear cracked. Then as he turned around he saw Will red in the face and screaming, right before Horace got lightning blasted in the chest and face.
20 years later, Horace and Will had split up the kingdom what they had deemed evenly. After Will had zapped Horace, he tied him up and killed all Horace’s soldiers roaming through the castle. He then teleported Horace and his army to their new kingdom, after telling them the new deal that the two brothers had made. All of Arabia soon learned of the splitting of the two kingdoms. They sent out their huge armies on Horace, only to be killed and demolished by Horace’s unwavering army. If they sent an army against Will, it would never make it past the boundaries of it’s own castle before being incinerated. This is how the two almighty brothers went along, soon they married and had children but never did their hatred of each other end until one day, coincidentally, they thought of the same idea at the same time all across the forests, deserts and seas. WAR!!
These two brothers were long sworn foes of each other, they still went along. Raising armies of great might and strength. The Battle toughened warriors of Sir Horace and the wizened magical beings of King Will. The two brothers met in battle on the fields of Asphodel(named for the fields covering greek god Tartarus.) They met, sword to staff, knowledge to intelligence. And the day went on…
When Horace’s army marched onto the field, all of the country men and/or other kings and queens who either were in the castle or watching through portals trembled for fear of the massive wall of shining metal and tough men. These soldiers had been through many battles, killing many poor people who were not submissive to Horace’s now 38 kingdom strong reign. But when Will’s army walked, flew, swam, glided, floated or whatevered onto the field of battle, sea of battle and air of battle, even Horace grimaced at the sight of the soldiers who had been fighting to make wills reign, 56 kingdoms strong. Soon from the lines of the army you could see the two brothers Will and Horace plus a close ranking or important person to them. Horace bringing his first follower and Will bringing up his dad, Resigned king Merek. The battle was gruesome for some and glorious for others. Horace’s army led the attack by sending 32,000 horsemen and 70,000 infantry. They clashed against the strong tough warriors known as vikings, after the 10 waves came back there were only about 200 horsemen and about 70-100 infantry left. When the Vikings returned, 79 out of the 113 of them were alive. Then Horace brought on the next wave and by the end of the day there only 30,000 of Horace’s troops and still Will had millions of creatures willing to fight. Then Will raised a horn made out the horn of The Devil. The horn was the deepest black and shone brightly a deadly glare. If you looked straight at it, you would be paralyzed and if you weren’t treated within 10 minutes you would become a minion and follower of the owner of the horn. After “The Horn” touched Will’s lips, a rich bellowing sound came out. From the ground rose thousands upon thousands of waves of the dead. Then when he blew the horn again four times, they came to a halt, lowered their weapons and walked to the sides of the field. Horace quickly rode up on his horse with 295 of the best and most experienced foot soldiers and horsemen. Together Will and Horace in the middle of the field of battle and set-up a table for them to make a treaty on. Exactly as they were about to shake hands, a song of the muezzin came floating through the air and wisped away the clouds to reveal sunlight. Immediately, the carried out carpets and they all prayed, following the third pillar of islam, the Zakat. After the negotiations ended the brothers did something they had never, ever done before, LOVE, HUG AND SMILE AT EACH OTHER!!!
It has been many, many years since the battle of Thoth (or so called) took place. There is peace in the land the two brothers rule in harmony after their dear parents have passed. One day their servant comes running. His burden is a scroll and he carries a golden trumpet and a dagger. “Sir,” he says, “Tremor has brought his armies into your territory….”