This summer was really exiting. I went to Yellowstone with my family. We saw bison and Old Faithful and elk. We went to the canyon and we did 13 mile hikes a lot. But before that we went to Lake Placid and did some bobsledding and skiing. We also got freaked out by a squirrel.
Great post, Ben! (And the squirrel is terrifying.)
Just a few notes: mind your capitalization. “lake placid and did some Bobsledding”– Lake Placid should be capitalized, bobsledding can actually be lower case, and so can “elk” (unless you were meeting up with someone with a very interesting name!)
Edit your post to make those corrections, and you’re all set. Let me know if you have any questions!
-Clair