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Crucible/McCarthy Essay
This is my final Crucible/McCarthy Essay. First, we started off making note cards with some analysis. Then I wrote the whole thing in a template. After that, we peer edited with our writing partners. Our next essay will be about Romeo and Juliet. (More)
Crucible/McCarthy Final Essay
My Crucible/ McCarthy final essay began being hard for me. I didn't know what to edit and how to begin. However, I then found that simply reading over my work I could make changes. I made sure the essay flowed together and it didn't seem blotchy. (More)
Essay Finish
I have finished my essay for The Crucible, The McCarthy Era and the Oscars. We made notecards and a template but after that, we deleted the template parts and edited a lot. We did peer editing with our writing partner and that really helped me be (More)
Crucible/McCarthy Essay
In Humanities we have been working on our Crucible Essay, combining all of our templates to make this final piece of work. To do this we had to clean it up once we were ready for the final step. I was struggling with making it concise but after all I (More)
Crucible/McCarthy Final Essay
This last step on finalizing this project was one of the easiest step. We had to make connections between our paragraphs and to make sure that everything flows very well. I basically already did that step because I was already thinking about tran (More)
Final Crucible/ McCarthy Essay
Finishing this essay was a long, hard process. I had to take the essay out of template form. Lots of heavy editing had to be done. We would peer edit, because sometimes editing someone else´s work is a lot easier to edit someone else´s.  We would (More)
Crucible/McCarthy Final Essay
The last step in making the essay was we had to take out our TEEAC format, and combine everything into paragraphs. Some of my paragraphs didn't transition well, so I had to add in transition sentences. After I was done combining everything, I pri (More)
Final Crucible/McCarthy Essay
  This is my final Crucible/ McCarthy Essay. We worked very hard to make this essay complete. We worked on peer editing to self editing and more. This is probably one of my best essays that I have done. My writing partner has helped me wi (More)
Crucible / McCarthyism Final Essay
After writing all of my paragraphs, I went over them all together, and checked to make sure they flowed together. From there, I edited each paragraph to make them work. We used a checklist to make sure we had everything like correct capitalizatio (More)
Crucible/ McCarthy Essay
Writing this essay was very fun because I learned a lot on my modern day example. I learned so much by doing the TEEAC paragraph. It was a much more organized structure and I had a lot of fun writing about each topic because I wasn't stressing about (More)
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  1. Mark Silberberg Says:

    On the main timeline page can we swap the text with the highlights link? This would make the link to the highlights more obvious and the text really contextualizes the sublinks. Keep the highlights red. Maybe the text against a gray.

    Possible for there to be some kind of video running in the background of the main page instead of an image?

  2. Chap Says:

    I like the themes that will come to the community throughout the year – keeping some content away so folks don’t get overwhelmed but also enticing folks to be ready for what’s to come.

    In that same way, the fact that each of the items on a timeline will have enough details that yo can read off of the text of that timeline or click to read or see more.

  3. Kobi Says:

    Header: Has there already been consideration for the call out in the header? Perhaps “LREI 100” or “100 years of LREI” instead of We Are LREI?

    Return to Timeline instead of Back to List

    Half tone images along the background of the timeline should be consistent and not fade to solid grey color.

    Are “Highlights” select pieces of content that introduce each decade? Or is it an aggregate of all content? I think the tags that filter in content in different ways is ideal so a way to punctuate it would be make the highlights be the former to encourage searching and poking around.

    Icons along the center line should change to reflect the respective tag filters: 4C’s Icons, Number’s for, Chronology, Select Themes for each of the chosen themes.
    You may want to implement background images shown to reflects the tag filters as well.

  4. Kobi Says:

    Portal page
    Fonts perhaps should match the headers – perhaps sans serif, not serif?
    Call to action: More iconography (less text)introducing icon treatments for comments made above.These can be clean lined icons or perhaps icons that feel handwritten?
    i.e. Next to “Explore the Centennial Timeline” in the red box it should be an icon that calls viewers to click. Ideas: “Click” “Play” “Explore”
    Since the site is dynamic, maybe the icon calling viewers to click it, pulses?

    The main page favors the portal page so much it almost feels like nothing happened when you go from one page to the next. It’s also copy heavy. Can we streamline with icons with fewer words?

  5. Kobi Says:

    HEADER: As users hover over the tabs can we highlight with contrasting color?

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