Envisioning

Envisioning directions:

Choose a part of the story that’s meaningful.  Step into the story and write lines that you think could fit in that section.  Pretend you’re the author and add details, such as what else the character might feel, see, hear, wonder about, etc. (Add more than just one sentence!)

EXAMPLE–

Text: “Our trip to the dump was always an adventure.”

New part: “You never knew what you’d find.  I’d hoped to find dollar bills or something expensive but it’s all junk.  I’ve found some small parts of broken toys. The dump is also scary.  I’ve seen a few rats crawling around and chewing on anything they could find. ” (written by Amalia)