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Finished Giver Essay

Name: Meadow                                             Humanities

7th Grade                                                                         The Giver

Missing Knowledge

You might not realize this, but you take for granted all the beauty that you see in your daily life. Imagine a world where all of the beauty has been sucked away and no memory of it remains, this is The Giver by Lois Lowry. When Jonas, a twelve year old boy, get assigned his job for the rest of his life, he is quite surprised when he gets the position as the receiver of memory. He is overwhelmed with his new knowledge about the lost world. He must find a way to show the rest of the community the memories they’re missing out on. This society is a dystopia because everyone is ignorant, except Jonas who is isolated and different because of his knowledge. Everyone is locked away from the world. They’re living a lie.

Jonas’s community is kept ignorant to block out the painful thoughts but ignorance blocks out the beauty too. The Elders don’t want the community to be hurt by the truth, so they stop everyone from knowing anything, including the most wonderful memories. For example, the Elders do not allow the community to feel sunshine just because it can burn them. Jonas, however, experiences the memory of sunshine because he is the next Receiver. “…as he lay basking in the wonderful warmth…His skin began to sting,” (Giver, page 75). The fact that sunshine can come with pain meant, to the Elders, that you shouldn’t experience it at all. This shows that some of the best things in this world are being locked away from the community. The Elders try to keep their citizens safe, but safeness for them only means ignorance. The community should have a choice about their life and what they can feel and see. Safety means that you should have choice and knowledge of the world around you. Jonas’s community should know the world’s past. They should be able to know what they are missing out on. As soon as Jonas gets his first bit of knowledge he wants to share it with everyone. He wants them to see the beauty they are missing.

When Jonas receives his first bit knowledge about the past, his world changes. This knowledge changes Jonas. He gets feelings that tear him apart. The community will never experience all these wonderful things. On page 84 In The Giver, Jonas realises something big. “…he knew it was ordinary no longer, and would never be again.” Having this new sense of knowledge meant he was different. The Elders don’t allow difference, yet the job the Jonas gets selected for forces him to stand out. He knows that no one can have emotions like he has. No one one can understand him. He is all alone and surrounded by a sea of ignorance. The situation that Jonas is in can be looked at in multiple ways. He is the most knowledgeable person in the community. He has great honor and people look to him for advice. But he is alone and isolated. No one knows what he knows. He is different. Jonas shouldn’t be the only one that knows about the past and the only one who has the wisdom to change the world. This knowledge should be shared with the community.  

This society is not a utopia because Jonas’s community is locked away from the beauty and history of the world. The community is ignorant and doesn’t understand that they are being controlled by the Elders. In Jonas’s community, ignorance and knowledge is almost like your ranking in the society. If you have knowledge you are honored, but to Jonas it is a burden. It is unfair that Jonas must suffer the knowledge and pain of these memories. In our society and world, you are not kept from the horrors of the truth. If someone dies there is nothing protecting you from the sadness that comes with it. The difference between our society and Jonas’s is that we have each other for support. If your grandma passes away you all have people and relatives supporting you through these hard times. A utopia means that everyone has a choice in their life and are free from the lies that hold us back. Sadly Jonas doesn’t get that freedom.   

Giver Essay Template

Name: Meadow                                             Humanities

7th Grade                                                                         The Giver

Outline for GIVER LITERARY ESSAY

Themes:

Ignorance and Knowledge  

Paragraph #1: Introductory Paragraph (GIT)

Grabber Statement (G): You might not realize that you take for granted all the beauty that you see in your daily life. Imagine a world where all of the beauty has been sucked away and no memory of it remains, this is the Giver by Lois Lowry.

Introduce Plot Summary (I): When Jonas get assigned his job for the rest of his life, he is quite surprised when he gets the position as the receiver of memory. He is overwhelmed with his new knowledge about the lost world. He must find a way to show the rest of the community the memories they’re missing out on.  

Thesis Statement (T): This society is a dystopia because everyone is ignorant, except Jonas who is isolated and different because of his knowledge. Everyone is locked away from the world. They’re living a lie.

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Paragraph #2: Thematic Analysis

Topic Sentence (T): Jonas’s community is kept ignorant to block out the painful thoughts but ignorance blocks out the beauty too.

Explanatory Sentence (E): The Elders don’t want the community to be hurt by the truth, so they stop everyone from knowing anything, including the most wonderful memories.  

Evidence (E): For example, Elders do not allow the community to feel sunshine just because it can burn them. Jonas, however, experiences the memory of sunshine because he is the next Receiver. “…as he lay basking in the wonderful warmth…His skin began to sting,” (page 75). The fact that sunshine can come with pain meant, to the Elders, that you shouldn’t experience it at all.

Analysis (A): This shows that some of the best things in this world are being locked away from the community. The Elders try to keep their citizens safe, but safeness for them only means ignorance. The community should have a choice about their life and what they can feel and see. Safety means that you should have choice and knowledge of the world around you.

Concluding/ Transition (C): Jonas’s community should know the world’s past. They should be able to know what they are missing out on. As soon as Jonas gets his first bit of knowledge he wants to share it with everyone. He wants them to see the beauty they are missing out on.  

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Paragraph #3: Thematic Analysis Continued

Topic Sentence (T): When Jonas receives his first bit knowledge about the past, his world changes. Knowledge changes Jonas.

Explanatory Sentence (E): He gets feelings that tear him apart. The community will never experience all these wonderful things.  

Evidence (E): On page 84, Jonas realises something big. “…he knew it was ordinary no longer, and would never be again.” Having this new sense of knowledge meant he was different. The Elders don’t allow difference, yet the job the Jonas gets selected for forces him to stand out.   

Analysis (A): He knows that no one can have emotions like he has. No one one can understand him. He is all alone and surrounded by a sea of ignorance. The situation that Jonas is in can be looked at in multiple ways. He is the most knowledgeable person in the community. He has great honor and people look to him for advice. But he is alone and isolated. No one knows what he knows. He is different.      

Concluding/ Transition (C): Jonas shouldn’t be the only one that knows about the past and the only one who has the wisdom to change the world. This knowledge should be shared with the community.  

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Paragraph #4: Concluding Paragraph (ROC)

Reflection on Thesis (R): This society is not a utopia because Jonas’s community is locked away from the beauty and history of the world. The community is ignorant and doesn’t understand that they are being controlled by the Elders.  

Overview of Main Points (O): In Jonas’s community, ignorance and knowledge is almost like your ranking in the society. If you have knowledge you are honored, but to Jonas it is a burden.    

Concluding Sentence– Comparisons and Connections (C): It is unfair that Jonas, a 12 year old boy, must suffer the knowledge and pain of memories. In our society and world, you are not kept from the horrors of the truth. If someone dies there is nothing protecting you from the sadness that comes with it. The difference between our society and Jonas’s is that we have each other for support. If your grandma passes away you all have people and relatives supporting you through these hard times. A utopia means that everyone has a choice in their life and are free from the lies that hold us back. Sadly Jonas doesn’t get that freedom.   

Summer Reading

Book 3Book 2Book 1

Themes

Futuristic downfall of new orleans after hurricanes- city killers

Global warming, ocean rises

SURVIVAL!

Everyone works

Bad education

Conflicts

Father’s relationship with nailer p.57

Swanks and shipbreakers

Swanks-rich, live in a different place, mansions, boats, feasts

Shipbreakers- Workers, lower class, shack, scavengers for quota$, No point of living.

Setting

In a dark place

New Orleans in the future

Child labor

Companies run the system

No ruler, king, president

The drowned cities

Symbols

Tattoos/marks-mean who you are and what you stand for

Characters

Nailer- Unknown age(about 15), lucky boy

Nita- Swank, lucky girl,

Richard Lopez- Scariest man on the beach, drug addict, father p.54

Pima- Sweet but tough, 18, black

Sadna- Mother of pima, kindest, mother to nailer

Bapi- boss of light crew, mean

Important/relavant

Different religious ideas

Fates Luck

Scavenge God

Quite dark and gruesome

 

My poetry reflection

In 6th grade so far we have worked on our poetry skill. Before poetry was introduced this year, I had already taken a liking to it. It really is an art and I can express a lot of my thoughts through this writing. I worked really hard on my memory poem and I have chosen that one to share in front of all the parents. We have explored many different styles of poetry and all of them are so different from one another. I hope that I continue this subject further in school.

Memory Poem

Oh Biza

How I miss when I could ride your back and sneak you treats

How I could nuzzle my face into your furr

When I spot a rhodesian ridgeback on the street I think of you

I had such little time with you before death came to your door

The tumor was in your lung and I couldn’t do anything to stop it

We drove up the the vet and said our goodbyes

I didn’t really know what was happening

I was too young to understand

I don’t believe in heaven or afterlife

But I know it was better for you to go in happiness than in pain

Personification Poem

I hang in the wind all day long

My pot getting warmer as the sun goes up

I divided the life of two families

I can’t help them

All I can do is listen

The arguments back and forth never stop

They are friends, they were friends

I bring each of them joy when they see my flowers

I bring light to the dark times

The lovely lady waters me

And the man smells me every morning

He comes back late at night and he holds me for support

He can’t stand by himself for he is too tired

One day the lady didn’t come back from work and the man watered me

He cried as he did

Then when the lady came back the hugged

I feel like I brought them together

The arguments stopped and laughter started

I grow old but they keep me alive

First line Poem

It was Martha who saw the lake first.

Even in the middle of a clear day, much of the jungle is dark as a room at dusk.

I shouldn’t have done it.

Rudi had a feeling that something was wrong as soon as he returned from the village.

They’re out there.

I was one of the kids who slipped through the cracks.

The little girl wouldn’t stop crying. I didn’t blame her.

I was completely aware that I was being an idiot, that we needed to get out of there before anyone saw us, but it was like I had eaten spill-your-guts, and words just kept pouring out.

A dream, just a dream was what a piece of my mind told me, but the terror and pain ‘just a dream’ evoked seemed no small thing. Yet I couldn’t escape it.

I never asked for this.

Attempted murder was not how piper liked to start her afternoon.

Style of Oni Poem

A girl sits by herself in the ally way.

Despair engulfs her like cancer.

No one’s there to see her cry and scream.

Alone forever and left with sorrow.

Death comes to her door every day,

But she fights it off like a pack of wolves.

Her face is deprived of life

She smells of sewer and human excrement

The people that walk by stare

Not knowing what to do

How can they help?

Life will go on like this for eternity

With different people every time

This will happen until they die.

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