Revision: For me Revision means to look through your piece and find bland sentences. For Example: ” Sara went to the Taco Truck. ”
For Example: ” Sara went to a green taco truck. The men inside had deep Spanish accents and were wearing sombreros. The pavement was wet from the rain. I reached out for the taco. The warm tortilla smelled fresh. The meat inside was steaming. etc…”
Kaya, this is a very brief definition of what revision is. I think you can go deeper.
You also should have reflected on how you think the revisions went when you revised your Arabian Nights piece. Are you proud of your work? Is there a way you could improve?